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-<div class="paragraph"><p><span class="big">Subsurface-mobile pour Android: MANUEL UTILISATEUR</span></p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p><span class="big">Subsurface-mobile USER MANUAL</span></p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p><strong>Auteur du manuel</strong> : Willem Ferguson</p></div>
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-<div class="paragraph"><p><span class="blue"><em>Version 1.0, Mars 2016</em></span></p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p><span class="blue"><em>Version 1.1, September 2016</em></span></p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Welcome as a user of <em>Subsurface</em>, advanced dive logging software with
 extensive infrastructure to describe, organize, interpret and print scuba
 and free dives. <em>Subsurface</em> offers many advantages over other similar
 software solutions, including compatibility with Windows, Mac-OS/X, Linux
-(many distributions) and Android (iOS under development). In addition,
-<em>Subsurface</em> is open-source software that allows downloading dive
-information from most dive computers.</p></div>
+(many distributions), Android and iOS. In addition, <em>Subsurface</em> is
+open-source software that allows downloading dive information from most dive
+computers.</p></div>
 <div class="sect1">
 <h2 id="_présentation_de_subsurface_mobile">1. Présentation de Subsurface-mobile</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
-<div class="paragraph"><p><em>Subsurface-mobile</em> est une extension de <em>Subsurface</em> sur ordinateurs. Il
-fonctionne sur les smartphones et les tablettes Android et c&#8217;est un outil
-pour visualiser et partager des informations de plongées sur des sites de
-plongées où un ordinateur n&#8217;est pas utile. <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> permet
-également de collecter des positions GPS où sont effectuées les plongées.</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>À cause des limitations d&#8217;iOS, <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> pour iOS n&#8217;inclut pas
-toutes les fonctionnalités présentes dans la version Android.</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>While <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> allows one to enter and save dive information
-using an Android device, users of <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> typically use the
-mobile app as an extension to the laptop/desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em>.
-This allows the storage of dive logs on the Internet sharing them between
-the Android and the desktop versions.  While the desktop version of
-<em>Subsurface</em> shows much more detailed information for each dive, the mobile
-version allows a more accessible dive log on a dive trip, useful for proving
-dive experience to dive shops or to review previous dives.</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p><em>Subsurface-mobile</em> allows one to:</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p><em>Subsurface-mobile</em> is an extension of <em>Subsurface</em> which runs on Android
+smartphone and tablet devices and is a tool for viewing or sharing dive
+information at dive sites where a larger computer is not
+useful. <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> for Android also allows the gathering of GPS
+locations where dives are performed (Subsurface-mobile for iOS currently
+does not support GPS functionality).</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p><em>Subsurface-mobile</em> allows you to enter and save dive information using a
+mobile device. Most users of <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> typically use the mobile
+app as an extension to the laptop/desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em>.  This
+allows the storage of dive logs on the Internet sharing them between the
+mobile and the desktop versions. But <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> can be used
+independently of <em>Subsurface</em> and does not require the use of cloud
+storage.  While the desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em> shows much more detailed
+information for each dive, the mobile version allows a more accessible dive
+log on a dive trip, useful for proving dive experience to dive shops or to
+review previous dives.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p><em>Subsurface-mobile</em> allows you to:</p></div>
 <div class="ulist"><ul>
 <li>
 <p>
@@ -459,17 +460,17 @@ Edit many of the dive log data fields, e.g. divemaster, buddy, equipment or
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
-Manually create and add new dive records to one&#8217;s dive log.
+Manually create and add new dive records to your dive log.
 </p>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
-Store the updated dive log on the Internet.
+Store the updated dive log in the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud storage.
 </p>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
-Record, store and apply GPS positions of dives.
+Record, store and apply GPS positions of dives (Android only).
 </p>
 </li>
 <li>
@@ -487,10 +488,10 @@ devices, but this is not yet ready for testing.</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect1">
-<h2 id="_installing_em_subsurface_mobile_em_on_an_android_device">2. Installing <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> on an Android device</h2>
+<h2 id="_installing_em_subsurface_mobile_em_on_your_mobile_device">2. Installing <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> on your mobile device</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Find <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> in the <em>Google Play Store</em>. Search for
-<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> and install it.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>Find <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> in the <em>Google Play Store</em> or the <em>iTunes Store</em>
+and install it.</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect1">
@@ -503,16 +504,17 @@ image below on left).</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Select whether <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> should access the Internet for dive log
 information.</p></div>
 <div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_when_not_using_internet_access">3.1. When NOT Using Internet access</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>If the striked-out cloud icon is selected, the app will not access the
-Internet to obtain dive log information. This means that dive log
-information is manually entered and stored on the mobile device only.</p></div>
+<h3 id="_when_not_using_cloud_storage">3.1. When NOT Using Cloud Storage</h3>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>Tap the striked-out cloud icon. The app will not access the <em>Subsurface</em>
+cloud storage server to obtain dive log information. This means that dive
+log information is manually entered and stored on the mobile device only.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_using_internet_access">3.2. Using Internet access</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Since <em>Subsurface</em> is largely dependent on a dive log saved on the Internet,
-provide a PIN for access to the <em>Subsurface Cloud</em>, obtained in one of two
-ways:</p></div>
+<h3 id="_using_cloud_storage">3.2. Using Cloud Storage</h3>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>In order to use the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud storage, an account on the cloud
+server is required. If you have already set up an account from the
+<em>Subsurface</em> desktop application, enter the credentials here.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>You can also create a new account from your mobile device.</p></div>
 <div class="sect3">
 <h4 id="_using_the_desktop_version_of_em_subsurface_em">3.2.1. Using the desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em>:</h4>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Open the desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em> and
@@ -520,14 +522,14 @@ click <em>File   &#8594;  Preferences  &#8594; Network</em>, explained in detail
 <a href="https://subsurface-divelog.org/documentation/subsurface-4-user-manual/#_create_a_cloud_storage_account">user
 manual for the <em>Subsurface</em> desktop version</a>. Once the account has
 been created and verified using the desktop version,
-<em>Subsurface</em> desktop alows one to download dive information from dive computers and store this
+<em>Subsurface</em> desktop alows you to download dive information from dive computers and store this
 on the cloud which can, in turn, be downloaded to <em>Subsurface-mobile</em>. <em>Subsurface-mobile</em>
 attempts to download the existing dive log from the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud
 server. Appropriate messages are shown onscreen. Finally a list of dives is shown.</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Once the dive list has been downloaded from the Internet,
-<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> keeps a local copy on the mobile device. This means
-that, if there is no Internet connection at a dive site, one can still
-access the local copy and view and manipulate dive information. If there is
+<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> keeps a local copy on the mobile device. This means that
+even if there is no Internet connection at a dive site, you can still access
+the local copy and view and manipulate dive information. If there is
 Internet connectivity, <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> accesses the cloud-based dive log
 to verify that the local copy is still the same as the Internet-stored
 copy. If not, the local copy and the copy on the server are synchronised.</p></div>
@@ -552,17 +554,9 @@ e-mail address provided.</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Enter the PIN into the field indicated and tap the <em>Save</em> icon again. The
 user information is stored on the cloud server and access to the cloud is
 enabled.</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>The dive list is initially empty. One can now start entering dives in the
-dive log or one can download existing dives from the cloud.</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>The text box to enter the PIN is shown whenever the e-mail address field is
-empty.  One can create a new cloud account by clearing the e-mail address
-and typing a new e-mail address, upon which a new PIN is sent to the
-newly-provided e-mail address.  On the other hand, one can change to a
-different existing cloud account by providing an e-mail address and password
-already registered with the cloud server (image on right, above)</p></div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Once Internet access has been enabled, one can temporarily disable this
-service when using <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> in areas with no Internet access,
-e.g. remote dive sites (see below)</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>The dive list is initially empty. You can now start entering dives in the
+dive log or you can download existing dives from your <em>Subsurface</em> cloud
+storage account.</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 </div>
@@ -577,16 +571,19 @@ use the Android Back button for "cancel", "discard" or "back" actions. For
 example, when editing dive information, tapping the action button saves the
 changes while the Android back button can be used to cancel the edit without
 saving changes.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>On iOS devices, on screens where a "back" action is enabled, a back arrow is
+shown in the top left corner of the screen.</p></div>
 <div class="imageblock" style="text-align:center;">
 <div class="content">
 <img src="mobile-images/actionbutton.jpg" alt="FIGURE: Action Button" />
 </div>
 </div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Instead of the more traditional "hamburger" menu button in the top left or
-right corner of the screen to open menus, <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> uses a
-different user interaction philosophy based on the Kirigami framework
-developed by the Plasma developers. To open the main menu one has three
-options:</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>In order to have a consistent experience between iOS and Android,
+<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> on Android does not use the traditional "hamburger" menu
+button in the top left or right corner of the screen to open menus.
+Instead, <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> uses a different user interaction philosophy
+based on the Kirigami framework developed by the Plasma developers. There
+are three ways to open the main menu:</p></div>
 <div class="ulist"><ul>
 <li>
 <p>
@@ -612,9 +609,12 @@ Drag the action button visible on most screens to the right
 </div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>The images above indicate some of the important features of the menu
 system.  On the left is the main menu that is activated as described
-above. In the middle is the menu that opens if one taps the <em>GPS</em> option on
-the main menu. On the right is the menu that opens if one taps the <em>Manage
+above. In the middle is the menu that opens if you tap the <em>GPS</em> option on
+the main menu. On the right is the menu that opens if you tap the <em>Manage
 Dives</em> option on the main menu.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>All screenshots in this user manual are currently from the Android
+version. As indicated earlier, the iOS version currently doesn&#8217;t support
+<em>GPS</em> features.</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect1">
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ Dives</em> option on the main menu.</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Most of the actions of <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> center around the dives on the
 dive list. While the dive list is loading from the cloud, a message appears
 at the bottom of the screen, indicating that the cloud is being accessed
-(see image on left, below). Once the list is loaded one can scroll up and
+(see image on left, below). Once the list is loaded you can scroll up and
 down.  Tapping a dive on the list brings up a display of <em>Details View</em> for
 that dive (see image on right below).  This includes the dive profile as
 well as additional information and notes.</p></div>
@@ -632,25 +632,25 @@ well as additional information and notes.</p></div>
 <img src="mobile-images/DiveList.jpg" alt="FIGURE: Dive list screen" />
 </div>
 </div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>One can view other dives by swiping the <em>Details view</em> to the right (for the
+<div class="paragraph"><p>You can view other dives by swiping the <em>Details view</em> to the right (for the
 previous dive) or to the left (following dive).  Using the Action Bar, it is
 also possible to delete the dive (tap the dustbin on the Action Bar) or to
-view the dive location on a map viewer (normally Google Maps; tap the GPS
-icon on the Action Bar.).</p></div>
+view the dive location on a map viewer (Google Maps on Android, the Google
+Maps web site on iOS; tap the GPS icon on the Action Bar.).</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect1">
 <h2 id="_editing_dive_details">6. Editing dive details</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
 <div class="paragraph"><p>At the bottom of the dive details screen the <em>Action Button</em> contains a
-pencil (image on right, above).  Tapping the button brings up a panel with
-edit boxes that allows one to change the existing dive information,
+pencil (image on right, above).  Tapping the pencil button brings up a panel
+with edit boxes that allows you to change the existing dive information,
 e.g. adding text to the dive notes or changing the names or values of some
 of the information (see image below).  It may be necessary to scroll the
 window to access all the information.  At the bottom of the edit screen is a
 <em>Save</em> action button. Tap this to save the new information. Having saved the
 data, the dive list screen is updated and shown. To cancel any edits, tap
-the Android Back Button.</p></div>
+the Android Back Button or swipe the edit screen up (fling it away).</p></div>
 <div class="imageblock" style="text-align:center;">
 <div class="content">
 <img src="mobile-images/EditDive.jpg" alt="FIGURE: Dive edit screen" />
@@ -661,16 +661,17 @@ the Android Back Button.</p></div>
 <div class="sect1">
 <h2 id="_adding_a_new_dive_to_the_dive_list">7. Adding a new dive to the dive list</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
-<div class="paragraph"><p>It is also possible to manually add an additional dive to the existing dive
-list. On the main menu tap <em>Manage dives &#8594; Add dive manually</em>. This opens a
-screen that is identical to the editing screen discussed above. When a dive
-is added manually, one cannot directly add a dive profile from a dive
-computer. However, if one does not use a dive computer, the duration, depth
-and several other bits of information about the new dive can be entered. The
-<em>Action button</em> at the bottom of the screen contains a disk symbol. Tap this
-to save the new dive. To cancel any edits, tap the Android Back Button.  The
-left-hand image below shows a screenshot of a dive being created and the
-right-hand image shows the same dive in <em>Details View</em>.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>You can manually add a dive to the existing dive list. On the dive list tap
+the "plus" sign in the <em>Action Button</em>, or use the main menu and tap <em>Manage
+dives &#8594; Add dive manually</em>. This opens a screen that is identical to the
+editing screen discussed above. When a dive is added manually, you cannot
+directly add a dive profile from a dive computer. However, if you do not use
+a dive computer, the duration, depth and several other bits of information
+about the new dive can be entered. The <em>Action button</em> at the bottom of the
+screen contains a disk symbol. Tap this to save the new dive. To cancel any
+edits, tap the Android Back Button.  The left-hand image below shows a
+screenshot of a dive being created and the right-hand image shows the same
+dive in <em>Details View</em>.</p></div>
 <div class="imageblock" style="text-align:center;">
 <div class="content">
 <img src="mobile-images/ManuallyEnterDive.jpg" alt="FIGURE: Manual dive entry screen" />
@@ -682,7 +683,7 @@ right-hand image shows the same dive in <em>Details View</em>.</p></div>
 <h2 id="_deleting_a_dive">8. Deleting a dive</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
 <div class="paragraph"><p>The <em>Details View</em> of a dive has an Action Bar, including a dustbin. If this
-is tapped, the dive shown in the <em>Details View</em> is deleted. One has a brief
+is tapped, the dive shown in the <em>Details View</em> is deleted. You have a brief
 opportunity to undo the delete by tapping the grey <em>Undo</em> button in the
 message that appears at the bottom of the screen (see image below).</p></div>
 <div class="imageblock" style="text-align:center;">
@@ -690,7 +691,7 @@ message that appears at the bottom of the screen (see image below).</p></div>
 <img src="mobile-images/Delete_undo.jpg" alt="FIGURE: Undo delete dive" />
 </div>
 </div>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>One can also delete a dive from the dive list by long-pressing a specific
+<div class="paragraph"><p>You can also delete a dive from the dive list by long-pressing a specific
 dive until a red dustbin appears on the right-hand side (see image
 below). Tap the dustbin. The dive is deleted without asking any confirmation
 because <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> assumes that the combination of a long tap on
@@ -711,7 +712,7 @@ using the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud storage.  This provides security against los
 or damage to the dive information contained in a local copy of the dive log
 and allows the desktop version of <em>Subsurface</em> to access changes made using
 the mobile device. This ability is accessed through the main menu (by
-dragging the Action Button to the right, or alternatively tap the
+dragging the Action Button to the right, or alternatively tappping the
 "Hamburger" icon at the bottom left of the screen).  Tap the option <em>Manage
 dives</em>, enabling a number of options:</p></div>
 <div class="sect2">
@@ -719,52 +720,47 @@ dives</em>, enabling a number of options:</p></div>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>This is described above under the section dealing with the dive list.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_upload_dive_log_to_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud_storage">9.2. Upload dive log to the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud storage</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>One can upload the dives contained on the mobile device to the <em>Subsurface</em>
+<h3 id="_sync_the_dive_log_with_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud_storage">9.2. Sync the dive log with the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud storage</h3>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>You can upload the dives contained on the mobile device to the <em>Subsurface</em>
 cloud storage by tapping the option <em>Manual sync with coud</em>.  This
-synchronizes the local changes to the dive log with the cloud storage.</p></div>
+synchronizes the local changes to the dive log with the cloud storage. It
+also downloads changes made on another device or computer and stored in
+cloud storage.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_download_dive_log_from_the_cloud_storage">9.3. Download dive log from the cloud storage</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>In the dive management subpanel, tap the option <em>Manual sync with cloud</em>,
-causing the local divelog to be refreshed from the cloud so that the cloud
-and local versions are synchronised.</p></div>
+<h3 id="_working_offline_or_online">9.3. Working offline or online</h3>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>By default <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> runs offline and only syncs the dive list
+with cloud storage when explicily told to do so (see above).  You can choose
+to always sync with the cloud servers after every modification of the dive
+list. This is not recommended unless you are in an area with fast and
+reliable internet connection, as otherwise <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> might appear
+to hang between operations as it tries to connect to the cloud server.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_working_offline">9.4. Working offline</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Sometimes one wishes to use the app when an Internet connection is not
-available, for instance at remote dive sites. In such a case
-<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> may unnecesarily search for an Internet connection,
-causing long delays in executing some functions. In the dive management
-menu, one can turn the Internet access on or off by tapping the <em>Offline
-mode</em> or <em>Enable auto cloud sync</em> options.</p></div>
-</div>
-<div class="sect2">
-<h3 id="_changing_the_login_credentials_on_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud">9.5. Changing the login credentials on the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>It may be necessary to change one&#8217;s login credentials, for instance if one&#8217;s
-email address (initially used as a credential) has changed. To change the
-credentials, open the main menu and tap <em>Cloud credentials</em>. This opens the
-setup screen for specifying new credentials.</p></div>
+<h3 id="_changing_the_login_credentials_on_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud">9.4. Changing the login credentials on the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud</h3>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>If you need to change your login credentials (for example to work with
+multiple accounts) you can open the main menu and tap <em>Cloud
+credentials</em>. This opens the setup screen for specifying new credentials.</p></div>
 </div>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect1">
-<h2 id="_recording_dive_locations_using_gps">10. Recording dive locations using GPS.</h2>
+<h2 id="_recording_dive_locations_using_gps_android_only">10. Recording dive locations using GPS (Android only).</h2>
 <div class="sectionbody">
-<div class="paragraph"><p>The fact that most smartphones have GPS facilities allows one to record the
-locations of dives. One can take the smartphone on the dive boat during a
-dive and locations will be automatically recorded at regular intervals.
-These locations can then be applied to dives in the dive list. Here is how
-it&#8217;s done:</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>The fact that most smartphones have GPS facilities allows
+<em>Subsurface-mobile</em> on Android to record the locations of dives. You can
+take the smartphone on the dive boat during a dive and locations will be
+automatically recorded at regular intervals.  These locations can then be
+applied to dives in the dive list. Here is how it&#8217;s done:</p></div>
 <div class="sect2">
 <h3 id="_setting_up_the_gps">10.1. Setting up the GPS</h3>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Open the main menu and tap <em>GPS &#8594; Preferences</em>. Now specify the way in
 which GPS data need to be automatically collected (image on right,
-below). One can specify that data are collected at regular intervals,
-e.g. every 10 minutes, or at regular distances, e.g. after the boat has
-moved more than 200m, or a combination of both of the above
-approaches. Provide the appropriate information and tap the <em>Save</em> action
-button. The program is now ready to collect GPS positions.</p></div>
+below). You can specify that data are collected at regular intervals, e.g.
+every 10 minutes, or at regular distances, e.g. after the boat has moved
+more than 200m, or a combination of both of the above approaches. Provide
+the appropriate information and tap the <em>Save</em> action button. The program is
+now ready to collect GPS positions.</p></div>
 <div class="imageblock" style="text-align:center;">
 <div class="content">
 <img src="mobile-images/gpssetup.jpg" alt="FIGURE: GPS setup screen" />
@@ -777,8 +773,8 @@ button. The program is now ready to collect GPS positions.</p></div>
 of the GPS submenu is a check box <em>Run location service</em> (image on left,
 above).  Check this box and <em>Subsurface-mobile</em> starts to collect GPS
 locations automatically, following the preferences specified as described
-above. After the dive one can deactivate the collection of GPS data by
-de-activating the same check box at the bottom of the main menu.</p></div>
+above. After return from the dive trip you can deactivate the collection of
+GPS data by de-activating the same check box at the bottom of the main menu.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
 <h3 id="_storing_the_gps_data_on_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud">10.3. Storing the GPS data on the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud</h3>
@@ -791,15 +787,15 @@ or not.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
 <h3 id="_downloading_gps_data_from_the_em_subsurface_em_cloud">10.4. Downloading GPS data from the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud</h3>
-<div class="paragraph"><p>Download the GPS data that have been saved on the cloud by selecting
-<em>Download GPS Data</em> from the GPS subpanel.</p></div>
+<div class="paragraph"><p>Download the GPS data that have been saved on the cloud (possibly by a
+different device) by selecting <em>Download GPS Data</em> from the GPS subpanel.</p></div>
 </div>
 <div class="sect2">
 <h3 id="_viewing_gps_data">10.5. Viewing GPS data</h3>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>From the GPS submenu (image on left, above) select <em>Show GPS fixes</em>. This
 brings up a list of GPS positions obtained using the location service (image
 on left, below). Two actions are possible for each of the locations, enabled
-if one taps the handle (the three horisontal stripes on the right, see image
+if you tap the handle (the three horisontal stripes on the right, see image
 on left, below) and then drags the specific item to the left (image on
 right, below). This exposes two options. Tapping the dustbin deletes this
 particular GPS location. Tapping the teardrop-shaped icon (actually a Google
@@ -815,7 +811,7 @@ drawing the GPS record to the right, again using the handle.</p></div>
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 <h3 id="_applying_gps_data_to_dives_in_the_dive_log">10.6. Applying GPS data to dives in the dive log</h3>
 <div class="paragraph"><p>Assuming that all the dives have been entered into the dive log or have been
-downloaded from the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud, one can apply the GPS positions to
+downloaded from the <em>Subsurface</em> cloud, you can apply the GPS positions to
 these dives. GPS positions can therefore only be applied to dives in the
 dive list.  From the GPS subpanel, tap <em>GPS-tag dives</em>. The dive list
 contains the start and end times of each dive. Now, <em>Subsurface-mobile</em>
@@ -829,7 +825,7 @@ the dive log.</p></div>
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-Last updated 2016-07-21 11:03:44 CEST
+Last updated 2016-10-11 10:53:14 CEST
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