From 4fa8706e25ff713335da66ae3326d6d9daaff8c9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Miika Turkia Date: Wed, 30 Jul 2014 07:26:04 +0300 Subject: Tune the introduction paragraph of user manual Signed-off-by: Miika Turkia Signed-off-by: Dirk Hohndel --- Documentation/user-manual.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt index 0184de5ad..27f15ede8 100644 --- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt +++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt @@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ Linus Torvalds, Miika Turkia, Amit Chaudhuri, Jan Schubert, Salvador Cuñat [blue]#_Version 4.2, July 2014_# -Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging programme with +Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging program with extensive infrastructure to describe, organise, interpret and print scuba -and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages above other similar +and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages over other similar software solutions: - Do you use two different dive computer brands, each with its own proprietary @@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ software solutions: interface for downloading dive logs from all these different pieces of equipment and to store and analyse the dive logs within a unified system. - Do you use more than one operating system? _Subsurface_ is fully compatible - with Mac, Linux and Microsoft, allowing you to access your dive log on each - of your operating systems in a unified way. - - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Microsoft-based software + with Mac, Linux and Windows, allowing you to access your dive log on each + of your operating systems with a single application. + - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Windows-based software for downloading dive information (e.g. Mares)? _Subsurface_ provides a way of storing and analysing your dive logs on other operating systems. -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2