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authorGravatar Miika Turkia <miika.turkia@gmail.com>2014-07-30 07:26:04 +0300
committerGravatar Dirk Hohndel <dirk@hohndel.org>2014-07-29 22:42:14 -0700
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Tune the introduction paragraph of user manual
Signed-off-by: Miika Turkia <miika.turkia@gmail.com> Signed-off-by: Dirk Hohndel <dirk@hohndel.org>
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@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ Linus Torvalds, Miika Turkia, Amit Chaudhuri, Jan Schubert, Salvador Cuñat
[blue]#_Version 4.2, July 2014_#
-Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging programme with
+Welcome as a user of _Subsurface_, an advanced dive logging program with
extensive infrastructure to describe, organise, interpret and print scuba
-and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages above other similar
+and free dives. _Subsurface_ offers many advantages over other similar
software solutions:
- Do you use two different dive computer brands, each with its own proprietary
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ software solutions:
interface for downloading dive logs from all these different pieces of
equipment and to store and analyse the dive logs within a unified system.
- Do you use more than one operating system? _Subsurface_ is fully compatible
- with Mac, Linux and Microsoft, allowing you to access your dive log on each
- of your operating systems in a unified way.
- - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Microsoft-based software
+ with Mac, Linux and Windows, allowing you to access your dive log on each
+ of your operating systems with a single application.
+ - Do you use Linux or Mac and your dive computer has only Windows-based software
for downloading dive information (e.g. Mares)? _Subsurface_ provides a way of
storing and analysing your dive logs on other operating systems.